When Dreams are Broken

There are two reason why I made this:

First, to try if I could make a comic without a use of dialog. I chose a pretty dark theme to try that on but I've been playing with this idea some time. Now, I'm not saying what happens in this comic is canon. I'm still playing with this idea because it would affect hugely these two (especially Napoleon). So, I let you fans to choose on your own if this comic is canon or not.

I personally can't decide. I like this but then again... I love the other, much happier, option as well...

The second reason, is to show what kind of comic style I had in mind for Black on White. I will definitely use this long comic layout. As for linearts and coloring, if I had made this how I do RD series, it would have took me 3 times more time. I've never done lineart this fast... Normally, doing a comic this huge would took me AT LEAST 10 - 15 hours. This, took me about 5-7. Consider that.

I'm still working on BoW comic layout so this is not final but this is what I kinda had in mind. I'd like to hear your opinions.

EDIT: Wow! Why do my experimental comics attract so much attention? Thanks for all the comments! And YES! The movie UP inspired me on the fifth panel! No need to point it out anymore. ...And I drew doctor's hand the wrong way...

EDIT2: This comic is now canon. Continuation: [link]

pokemon (c) Nintendo
Random Doom (c) me